Some of the positive feedback had alot to do with the texture of the piece. The use of hot gule strings and strands made it difficult to tell what the material originated from and made it very interesting. Using the wall as the canvas help added interest beacuse the the viewers eye kept travling. There was a good amount of movement in each piece with the texture and more movement with the shape each piece takes in making an even larger piece.
Some negitive feedback i need to improve on is craft and the overlooking some details that could have really strengthen the piece. Tape could be seen at certain angles, the pieces backing was also able to be seen at angles. Beacuse of the shape, color, and texture this piece should not be shown at all times. For example, holloween would be a bad time, the meaning would be lost. It would come off as spider web looking or a witches broom shape. With out the story the sense of the piece could be found confusing.
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